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Evaluation part 1:

evaluation screening

evaluation screening

Question Asked:

What did you like about the final trailer?

Answers Given:

- Good use of diegetic sound

- Pacing (x3)

- Good use of montage

- Knife sound effect

- Clear Narrative (x12)

- Good use of body horror (x11)

- Effective music (x10)

- Clever use of phallic symbol with knife

- Unique concept

- Inter-titles read well (x5)

- Effective jump scare (x6)

- Wheel shots added to narrative (x3)

- Slo-mo knife shot (x2)

- Setting

- Scene when girl wakes up and sees the killer

- Good Ending (x2)

- Edited well (x2)

- Acting was good

- Nice cinematography

- Wide range of shots

Question Asked:

What do you think still needs to be improved?

Answers Given:

- Some shots are too long

- Becomes boring (x2)

- Scream is one shot is cut to suddenly

- Jump scare at the end was too quick (x3)

- Louder sound for jump scare (x3)

- Scream shot used twice (x4)

- Order of scenes is sometimes confusing

- Starting with inter-title isn't the best start

- Unclear why killer left

- Maybe closer up shot when hair is being pulled off

- Killer doesn't look evil enough

- Inter-titles could of tied in with story better with the use of colour

- Unsure if like font on inter-titles

- Music needs some work sounds a bit like dracula

- Levels on audio may need some work in places (x2)

- Could be more dialogue

- Title at the end a little too fast

focus group screening

Focus group screening

Focus group screening

Question Asked:

What did you like about the trailer?:

Answers Given:

- Intertitles slashed were slashed which matched the theme of the trailer. (x10)

- Knife drop to floor was cut and edited well and had good sound effects. (x8)

- Make-up/ gore effects were good. (x10)

- Good use of close-ups to reflect emotion. (x2)

- Good lighting - Mostly dark.

- Dialogue and acting done well. (x3)

- Location variety.

- Good use of cross-cutting.

- Ending scene of Jordan at the end of the bed. (x2)

- Scenes were broken up into different places.

- Good variety of different shots/ cinematography. (x5)

- Plot is well explained. (x4)

- Equilibrium is broken quickly with a jump scare. 

- Good shots of the car.

Question Asked:

What do you think could be improved in the trailer?

Answers Given:

- Needs Music. (x12)

- Knife across face scene it looks like Maria is laughing.

- Too many intertitles.

- Storyline not very clear. (x2)

- Needs more variety of shots.

- Scream is very random.

- Intertitles go on a long time. (x3)

- Screams are cut short.

- Add blood to knife shot for effect. 

- Could be more serious in some scenes. (x2)

- A greater variety of angles. (x2)

- Didn't understand blonde girl popping up. 

- Wheel shot needs to be re-shot. (x2)

- Wasn't very fast paced. (x3)

- Possibly more dialogue.

- Opening shots are too quick for intro.

- Don't understand the hair.

- Two similar scream shots.

- Why did the man leave then stalk her?

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